tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1660090614793277371.post8669719034524956368..comments2024-03-19T21:14:01.007-07:00Comments on The Compass Rose: The Early Lyrics of Ed Dorn [Part I]Curtis Favillehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06213075853354387634noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1660090614793277371.post-80202378924679093422009-08-02T22:49:30.236-07:002009-08-02T22:49:30.236-07:00two things i notice in the poem
elements i am alwa...two things i notice in the poem<br />elements i am always attracted to<br />the use of internal rhyme<br />and the juxtaposition of contrasting images<br />the really dirty and tough and dangerous and hard and sweaty work set off by the appearance of the daughter being so delicate and songful<br /><br />i've got to read more dorn<br /><br />thanks<br /><br />jjhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10043530995274885830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1660090614793277371.post-89552437582842501982009-08-02T11:59:01.567-07:002009-08-02T11:59:01.567-07:00ae man! there's gunslinger!!
remember that ...ae man! there's gunslinger!!<br /><br /><br />remember that "thing" he and Diane diPrima did at that Museum re:<br /><br />HELLO, La JOLLA AND LOBA?<br /><br /><br />some guy there connected w Wingbow gave me two of the posters... 1978!<br /><br />thanks for the post <br /><br />and re-treat into my yes-ter-yore!Ed Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11285310130024785775noreply@blogger.com